September 28, 2009
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You belonged to an old race
of bare feet and white dreams.
You came from dust, you are dust
And you think that
heat always softens iron.You bit the apple
and renounced paradise
and condemned a serpent
just because you were the one that wanted it that way.For thousands of years
You remained naked
And you faced dinosaurs
under a roof and without a shield.
Comments (5)
If you managed to write this out after drinking (looks at your pulse), I’d be impressed to see how you could write when sober! Either way, I like it! Please post more poems too–you surprise me with what you write and say.
@GreekPhysique - they are song lyrics to new song. I can manage the copy/paste button!!!!!
But here’s a poem for you
GreekPhysique
is unique
Go to his house for candy
and he’ll give you a treat
Hit him in the head
and you’ll get beat
…I’m just kidding
He is really nice
He’ll patch your head up
and soak it in ice
then he’ll give you a hug and a tickle
and if you are cool
…give him a pickle!
End.
@ShimmerBodyCream -
Woo-hoo! That entertained me to no end, especially rhyming Physique with unique. You and your hidden gifts, ha, it makes for great times. See you Tuesday!
very interesting
@BlizzZX - i had too much beer